REVISION after critics:
So I’ve decided and know further what I am gonna do for final output of practice after input from few lectures’ critics. I make clear what and how my design gonna be in new slide / pdf also know how to put maori / culture aspect in the design as there is a connection between.
I revise almost half of total slides because one of input from lectures is too much research and need to get to the point after describing only an outline of scape research.
What makes my skate park different from the others is because I am gonna put a tribe (maori culture) pattern, design and graffiti in the landscape or skate arena to attract and appeal the beauty of the tradition.
Another reason is I did a research that all of skate park in Auckland city only a plain one.
So these are sketches and additional forms that I will put in my skate park.
My revision is now more clear in aspect of my practice area and my final outcome of project.
This is the note I got from lectures’ critics: